Monday, August 31, 2015

Once upon a time there were three sisters and one brother. Their names where Phoebe,Nevaeh and Ataahua. The brothers name was Dallas. One day they all decided to go for a walk so they did. 
"Where are we going?" said Nevaeh. 
"We are going to the river'' replied Phoebe. Dallas took a photo of the three sisters while they were on holiday. When Dallas took the photo he fell into the river with the camera went in the river with Dallas. He drowned in the water. Dallas called out help,help. Ataahua went and save Dallas but Dallas float away to fast. Phoebe,Nevaeh, and Ataahua went to another part of the river Dallas was at a deep end. Ataahua went  in the river to save Dallas. Ataahua saved him and when he got out of the water he had stoped breathing. So Phoebe called the ambulance. The three sisters waited for 5 minutes finally the ambulance came. Nevaeh called our parents to meet us at the hospaital. So our mum came and said" what is a wong with dallas." He" fell into the river said nevaeh." He woke up but he had a broken ankle. Dallas went home and he was on crutches. The end.PLEASE COMMET

3 comments:

  1. I really like your story it's nice and long.
    From Timira

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  2. I really like your story it's nice and long.
    From Timira

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  3. WOW big story from your best best friend nevaeh love your story

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